anyone here play?

[13hourstoparadise]

I was thinking about picking music back up.

And no one in my area is really into deftones, glassjaw, team sleep, etc.


So I was thinkin if any forum members here play and have recording capabilities we could write something pretty bitchin.


anyone up to it?

Yeah dude, let's collab!!!

listen to my demo tracks, if you like my direction, let's make some music.

www.myspace.com/13hourstoparadise

[13hourstoparadise]

Heres an outline of a song, it's kind of teamsleepish but the production quality isnt great.

I'm looking to add a hard part around 1:11 of the song, but you are free to add anything.


http://rapidshare.com/files/127918766/DZEL.mp3.html

Cool track! I like it... If I feel up to it tonight I'll add a little something something...

[13hourstoparadise]

Heres an outline of a song, it's kind of teamsleepish but the production quality isnt great.

I'm looking to add a hard part around 1:11 of the song, but you are free to add anything.


http://rapidshare.com/files/127918766/DZEL.mp3.html

I envoloped the song and fixed the EQ, the quailty couldn't be corrected. I added some mellow guitar riffs... I don't know where to upload it so I just put it on my myspace page as the song title of DZEL.

www.myspace.com/13hourstoparadise

We can do A LOT better... Keep stuff coming!

[Corleone]

Heres an outline of a song, it's kind of teamsleepish but the production quality isnt great.

I'm looking to add a hard part around 1:11 of the song, but you are free to add anything.


http://rapidshare.com/files/127918766/DZEL.mp3.html

I envoloped the song and fixed the EQ, the quailty couldn't be corrected. I added some mellow guitar riffs... I don't know where to upload it so I just put it on my myspace page as the song title of DZEL.

www.myspace.com/13hourstoparadise

We can do A LOT better... Keep stuff coming!

Well it was 2 mins of recording into a shitty mic, I'm suprised it even worked.

[13hourstoparadise]

Did you dig the guitar riffs I added to the song by the way?

I know, they are simple, but was it kind of the direction for the song you were looking for?

I shouldn't have added a phaser, the stereo jumps back and fourth for the low quaility beats... But, don't get me wrong, I like 'em...

Next song can you save them directly from Fruity Loops? Each layer, that way I way professional edit them in Cool Edit Pro...

[Xedora]

corleone, PM me some lyrics to DZEL if you got any written.

[Xedora]

I wrote the lyrics I was gonna record vocals on dzel next week

Pictures of us in our prematurity,
locked away and buried under years of false reform and obscurity
and change means nothing when progression just creats distance.
I spent two weeks prepairing and four years trapped in memmory
under the weight of the clock where the tall and slender become the stout and limp wristed
I will peel my lips for another look at these pictures,
and you can stray again for a taste of salt.

they won't be arranged like that, but yea.

if you got something better let me know.

13 hours, you don't by chance have the project file where your guitar track and the original song are seperate track do you? I wanted to screw around with a little more eq and stuff.

[Corleone]

Did you dig the guitar riffs I added to the song by the way?

I know, they are simple, but was it kind of the direction for the song you were looking for?

I shouldn't have added a phaser, the stereo jumps back and fourth for the low quaility beats... But, don't get me wrong, I like 'em...

Next song can you save them directly from Fruity Loops? Each layer, that way I way professional edit them in Cool Edit Pro...

yeah I do like that riff, sounds alien like lol

could you upload the mp3 to rapidshare.com?

If you made the last note on the riff the same as the 3rd to last, I think it would sound better

[Corleone]

I wrote the lyrics I was gonna record vocals on dzel next week

Pictures of us in our prematurity,
locked away and buried under years of false reform and obscurity
and change means nothing when progression just creats distance.
I spent two weeks prepairing and four years trapped in memmory
under the weight of the clock where the tall and slender become the stout and limp wristed
I will peel my lips for another look at these pictures,
and you can stray again for a taste of salt.

they won't be arranged like that, but yea.

if you got something better let me know.

13 hours, you don't by chance have the project file where your guitar track and the original song are seperate track do you? I wanted to screw around with a little more eq and stuff.

If either of you want to record the parts I did over again, I'm cool with that too.



The first lines you wrote are awesome, it actually fits into what I was thinking.

[Xedora]

I recorded and messed around with some stuff, but you'll haveto bear with me.

I don't have a mic here, so i recorded it on my cell phone, then emailed it to myself, then loaded it into cubase, plus the baby was sleeping so i couldn't be too loud haha.

Since I wasn't taking the whole recording on my cellphone thing serriously, I decided to use the vocals more as another instrument then actual vocals.


uploading it now.

[Xedora]

i threw it up on my old metal bands mysapce

myspace.com/rohis

[13hourstoparadise]

I say we start from scratch, unless Corleone you don't have fruity loops layers saved?

I like the lyrics...

Let's make this happen... I'm in the studio so get back to me as soon as you can... Messages on my myspace page is best.

[Xedora]

definately.

[Corleone]

nah I don't have anything, it's all on my buddies mac book

it's all up to you guys to rework the song

[13hourstoparadise]

Well, at least slap yourself... And record that noise?!

[Xedora]

13 hours, is it cool if I expirament with some vocal stuff on that 'amanda's song' demo you got on your space?

[Xedora]

I did it anyway 


You got AIM? it would be easier to send stuff that way

[Xedora]

Your hands are like water through my finger tips
you breathe for me
our feet in the sand
and the water overtakes us
or so the dream went
or so the dream went
but sleep doesn't come easy anymore
I'd do anything to feel your hair in my face
I'd scratch through glass
but I suppose the composite abstractions
are just selfish
I wonder what you look like now
do you still sing to the sirens?
the wind blows your hair in my face
we share a breath
our feet sink into the sand
We trade a kiss
and the water takes us in
or so the dream went...
or so the dream went...

[13hourstoparadise]

I did it anyway 


You got AIM? it would be easier to send stuff that way

I use Skype, but I gave you my phone number, feel free to call me...

Yes, by all means do what you want with my tracks. I'm recording new tracks tonight. I might have them uploaded tonight.