Nov 25 2007

[theshadeisatool]

Nov 25 2007

[wither-I]

Grant me a reprieve!
Write it down
Remember this and remember the sound (it made)
Record it in books
Tell the serfs
And I beseech you, don't deny me something I deserve
By telephony
Confirm the news
I've had enough and ready to pull punches, retract your views
I'm fine/fucking swine
Return to carriage and sign the fucking truce.

Be gentle...
(When will I be famous?)

pretty good. better than anything else ive read on this board...

[occipudding]

mad good.  i like how you say (it made) in line 3.  kinda throws it off a little bit and brings you back into reality for a second.  irked me a little at first but it grew on me.  good shit

[theshadeisatool]

Well thanks to both of you, I thought I'd get laughed out of here, just thought I'd test the water but appreciate the comments.