so i decided to go ahead....

[wither-I]

...and write a new one....enjoi! 

[As she soars up to me- I am prized and posed a perched endeavor.
Aquiring past summit due,
she then collapses climatically to the stars- a gala surrender.
As to only flutter back down again,
glaring like designer rains off lavish clouds....
Rain! Falter! Rain! Adore my thirst- quench all natural desire.../b]

[Jacob]

trying too hard.

[wither-I]

trying too hard.

how do you figure that...?
i know some people before have said that about my writings because they struggle to find meaning in it themselves... hence saying "I" try too hard...

[Jacob]

dude, I was just drunk and being an asshole. sorry.

I kinda like it, actually.

[wither-I]

no worries
thanks man